tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2398341296069249484.post1994941394026365431..comments2011-12-13T21:07:50.670+02:00Comments on Reflext: TreacheryHugo van Zijlhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10777400030172830177noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2398341296069249484.post-15895096912878975282011-12-10T06:54:20.894+02:002011-12-10T06:54:20.894+02:00So awesome! Loved this one from start to finish, a...So awesome! Loved this one from start to finish, and it just picked up momentum as it went along.<br /><br />"Still, I wish he'd made a run for it." Such a powerful line, because in a way I wish he had too--but then we wouldn't have been able to see the protagonist as THE virtuous man among sinners.<br /><br />So again, brilliant with "...you're going all the way down." because it succinctly and beautifully answers the audience question of why the murderer didn't get his comeuppance in Violence and ties everything together neatly.<br /><br />Great job and glad you participated.David A Ludwighttp://by.davidaludwig.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2398341296069249484.post-35703960319438315612011-12-10T00:45:08.822+02:002011-12-10T00:45:08.822+02:00Just read through all your entries - it's an i...Just read through all your entries - it's an inspired take on the #DivineHell challenge. I love the strong, bitten off slightly screwed up cop voice that your narrator has and the light touch you've had with the daily themes. Brilliant!Meg McNultyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04985840066083718618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2398341296069249484.post-90571902997838761102011-12-09T18:32:55.635+02:002011-12-09T18:32:55.635+02:00Nice end tot he tale Hugo. For 700 odd words it re...Nice end tot he tale Hugo. For 700 odd words it really was an epic tale, and I agree with Ralph, my favourite of yours so far too.Craig Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07176851401465801580noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2398341296069249484.post-22349033013653725042011-12-09T12:26:34.463+02:002011-12-09T12:26:34.463+02:00Aw shucks [blush]
Good on you for finishing mate! ...Aw shucks [blush]<br />Good on you for finishing mate! My favourite pieces of your writing so farRalph Ruddhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14644229619514739158noreply@blogger.com